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Rapunzel by melitoe Rapunzel by melitoe
Drawn in Illustrator CS5, coloured in PhotoShop.

My first computed drawn piece :)

Edit: Cropped a bit off top and left side :)

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(Reference taken from Kippery)
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My favorite part of this piece is the coloring. The combination of subtle colors work well together. I like the way the "parchment" is allowed to become the color of Rapunzel's skin. The largest areas of black in the piece are concentrated near Rapunzel's eyes. This draws the viewer's attention to that area so that we return her steady gaze.

I feel there are a couple of subtle tweaks that could make the piece even better. First, I think the balance of the composition would be improved by cropping away some of the blank space near the top (and perhaps cropping a small amount away from the left side as well). Second, varying the line weights more would improve this piece's technique rating. The heavier lines used on the neck and left shoulder create a subtle sense of depth. The same technique used on the jaw line and other key areas would really make the whole thing "pop".

Nice job!
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:iconjbrenthill:
jbrenthill Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Beautiful piece!
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melitoe Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012
Thank you ! :)
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mintwinter Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
looks cool :3
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ChiuuChiuu Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2012
Absolutely stunning!
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becsketch Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
This could be the cover of a beautiful book - lovely! :)
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melitoe Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2012
thank you :) means a lot to know that people like my work
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MightyMorphinPower4 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012
Beatfuil work on her
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